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Hands in pockets, shoes in puddles
head in anger wound.

Eyes on petals, lips on raindrops
ears on thunder sound.

Nose in flowers, face in fog
thoughts in image found,

Heart is settled, mind is still-
and green-eyed monster drowned.
©2006-2009 ~Frostypeanut
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Author's Comments

Full title: Seussish Anger in Raindrop Bliss.

Just some notes: It's obviously wound as in like wound up, and not wound as in like injury.
Also, green-eyed monster is a term for jealously, in case you didn't know.

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:iconpsychoshit:
Green Rules!!.. :dead: poor monster... *sob*
It's refreshing in a way..something new.

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"We live to know that we can die at anytime." - PsychoShit
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"I want a duck shaped like a triangle,
You give a toaster to Bob"
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Very nice. I'm particularly fond of the first and last stanzas.

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I'd like to state that I draw and write solely to boost my ego. I am both petty and immature. Everything I do has potential, but I thouroghly enjoy giving writers a bad name. I enjoy "mindless, meaningless, and fairly annoying reviews" much more than none
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Why, thank you much. :D

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I know what a prince and lover ought to be.
:iconfrostypeanut:
Meh. MEH.

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I know what a prince and lover ought to be.
:iconnecrosunderground:
"Lips on raindrops"... I just LOVE that line. Very beautiful, great combination of imagery.

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If you weren't quite so big, it would be time for Mr. and Mrs. Spank to pay a short, sharp visit to Botty-land.
:iconfrostypeanut:
Spanks very much!

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I know what a prince and lover ought to be.
:iconnecrosunderground:
:rofl:

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If you weren't quite so big, it would be time for Mr. and Mrs. Spank to pay a short, sharp visit to Botty-land.

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